Raheel Savani

Outstanding piece of work. Wow. thats all i can really say. Wow. You gave the bed a life, a soul, a personality. In a sexual environment, you made the bed ...

It does a good job of hooking the reader, however there are several points that read out awkwardly, mainly due to punctuation. "My house was large it was two stories ...

This work is one of the more abstract ones I've read, and it did a great job on keeping my attention. A rather sinister and daunting story about how one ...

thank you for your input, aztoriwhitaker. I will begin working on implementing your suggestions immediately. You ask how I came up with this? I am the main character in this ...

This is wonderfully written. I think you did a spectacular job of hiding what Kenny was while still portraying that he is loved by the character and is comforting to ...

Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. "Hi you've reached my voice mail and I am unable to answer the phone right now so leave your name and a number and I will ...

My name is Raheel. Born in Pakistan, but raised and loyal to America. I am 20 years old, and I'm an avid writing fan.